Geof

 Realised I needed to reduce his head!  And his shoulder too (which was less traumatic)

 Head's better but now working on getting the relationship between place and sitter happening:  want to get more of the sense of him in the shade of the tree and the hot bright hills behind him (where he used to play as a kid!) there and present but bleached out and hot looking.

Worked on head area (hard to tell at the distance) and getting the checks happening to create volume in the shirt.  Still not sure whether I'll knock the clothing back to bring out the head and arms yet.  Will see how things go when I'm happier with the landscape.