Had to deal with eye shape and right hand profile. Also moved the nose down a bit, the mouth down, then back up, almost to where it was before. So some nice details lost but happier with overall composition now.
Experimenting on my old friend a bit here: top one is a little one on board: playing with textures in gloopy paint (quite hard to see here tho); bottom one, which is quite big,I'm thinking about leaving bits of it quite loose and unfinished, perhaps simply adding some washes of tone/colour to the sketch outline. The joy of oils is that if it doesn't work out I can simply keep going and paint over it.